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Thursday, December 10, 2009 from somewhere in Oregon, USA
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Lynx-Eye
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Another well-written, but necessarily unpleasant, story.


Of these three stories, this is the easiest one to pin down the chronology. The cliff-hanger ending is a day before the cliff-hanger at the end of part 7 of J&Q. The beginning is about a week earlier, putting it a day or three before the J&Q battle on the island, which is either 21 April or 4 July 2030.


The school-free day of cheerleader practice and mall-crawling, and the J&Q reference to her brother's day camp, support the July date.


The gorgon that Stephanie feels such affinity for is the one with a reputation as a great warrior and a high body count. I wonder, is she going to start kicking ass after she gets the drugs out of her system?

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Wednesday, September 17, 2008 from Phx, USA
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Jade
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Cliff hangers are always your singature. Without them we wouldn't be fans!
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Saturday, February 23, 2008 from Ft.Worth, USA
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cavrider
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I thought it was sick !
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Thursday, February 14, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Civilmage
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I sure wish the tentacles had poisonous snakes on the ends. I hope she finishes these guys off.

! Where is Chapter 7 of Jet and Quartz?!!
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Tuesday, February 12, 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey there. I didn't think that was too dark. It was sad but not nearly as dark as Wolf's Tale. I liked it, except for the very end. Oh, and I didn't like the father. grrrrrrrr

I do think it would've been better to end the story right as Stephanie is being taken away in the SUV. It would leave more up to the imagination - ala Alfred Hitchcock.

I have one question though. I'll post the question in the forum too. What DNA is mixed in to produce a Gorgon-like hybrid?
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Wednesday, February 06, 2008 from [not submitted], England
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EMW
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That's a pretty dark tale, but I enjoyed it. It does leave me wanting to find out what happened to poor Stephanie.

I look forward to more on this character. Keep up the good work

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Tuesday, February 05, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Shrike
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Just call it a cliffhanger. I try to use them as much as possible, makes the readers go nuts with anticipation.
Good story, when is she going to use her new name?And I did find something to nitpick.
In the first paragraph 'she ruffled her hair' I think must be 'his hair' and 'he got out from under his hand'? 'her hand' most likely.
But a good job, don't leave us hanging too long though.
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