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Monday, May 14, 2012 from VzUXDQEgUVYoWvnb, ALuOidWesiUSLC
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Lyza |
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Nice to see that Andrew Grant won first place for his add-in Whiist. He takes home a cool $10,000I knew he had it in the bag when I downloaded his first edition! Congrats and Great job! |
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thais.medeiros@bbcr.com.br |
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Sunday, May 13, 2012 from LHyWAhtRmMqRCtugW, RmFGRdJSDof
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Bobbo |
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All I have is snow, too. Your previous post made me scared to present any more snow shots. Fake cactus and snow is a good combo, though. I almost took one of an ice machine mostly buried in snow. |
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slsbjysq@126.com |
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Saturday, May 12, 2012 from vgZRmPNjXVquHK, rJKLoSLiEJMwActwMXv
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Ivalene |
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I’m not clear on what’s happening, is the adsense appearing on the post/page or the sidebar? Is it caused by a plugin? If it’s on the post page, check the page/post to make sure no adsense is there and then look into either a home.php or into the index.php for adsense. |
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jbbongle@gmail.com |
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Tuesday, May 01, 2012 from LXjQmtnYSyizQnlcI, dEwsKGCDqRHNtFf
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Hippie |
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I’ve seen the exact same thing. An article that I submitted using its headline and strapline for the title and description managed one Digg. About a week later, someone submitted the same article with the title “Something every Digg user should know” or something along those lines, and it went straight to the homepage. Part of the key is engaging the Digg community. Direct an opinion or idea at them, give them something to react or respond personally to. |
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Saturday, April 28, 2012 from ZQrnHkFmptm, AVYzuakYVKIDyz
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Chris |
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A funny thing I learned about Stephanie & Landon on their weinddg day.. Believe it or not, they lived their whole lives just a block away from each other and just met a couple years ago. So crazy. Their weinddg was out in Chilliwack. We are SO blessed it did not rain [70% chance of showers in Chilliwack is kinda doom ha]. Loved the country area there with mountains. Not too far from where we did their country motorcycle engagement session. |
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Monday, March 02, 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Starfox Howl |
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While the story is entertaining overall, there were too many things happening and too many 'gotchas' thrown in to allow the story to be believable even in the MORFS universe where odd things happening is the norm. Edictic memory, martial artist of the Shanghi opera caliber, working towards a PI's license since 16, and now dropping out of high school to open an agency. I think this could be a very good story, but you're going to have to pare back some of the WOW's in it. Also, as someone else has pointed out, you need to slow down and introduce your characters a bit better. A good first try, but I think you need to pull this back and rework. |
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Thursday, February 26, 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry |
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Destiny is a nice name. I like it. I like this story so far too, though I have no idea where you're going with it. I would've liked to see a bit more of the story posted. There's still the MORFS examination. I would've liked to have seen that. I'm curious about any powers that Destiny might have. I have to agree about the typos and misspelled words. The story is a bit rough and could use some proofreading and maybe a little editing. Please consider it. Thanks for the story. 
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terrynaut@yahoo.com |
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Wednesday, February 25, 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Ray Drouillard |
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Very nice start. I love a character that has a good head on his/her shoulder. As someone else mentioned, a good editor will help you clean up some of the distracting mechanical errors. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story. Keep up the good work. |
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Ray.Drouillard@gmail.com |
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Tuesday, February 24, 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Nuke Danger |
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Ummm... Please edit to fix there/their issues. Sure beats waist/waste or shudder/shutter... - nukie |
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Monday, February 23, 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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hartung |
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hey, nice idea for a story so far. but you should work on your style. i didn't get half of the story because you didn't introduce the chars properly and you write slower, meaning your story progressed a little too fast. greetz |
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