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Saturday, February 11, 2012 from Wisc Rapids, United States
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Name
Sweet-Girl87
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When is the next chapter coming out????
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The_Sweet_Girl1987@yahoo.com
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Monday, September 19, 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Name
Beyogi
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Too dark to continue? Seems to be interesting, but she'll probably go on a killing spree... She doesn't seem to be that murderous though.
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Monday, August 10, 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Name
G
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good start keep it up
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Saturday, February 28, 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Name
Terry
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Cool. You really captured the anger of a homeless teen well.
The name 'Manifest' is perfect for her. I love that. I love her power too.
I wonder if the event that she doesn't want to face is clothes shopping. I bet it is! *giggle*
Thanks very much. I hope to read more. Please keep it up.
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terrynaut@yahoo.com
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