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Tuesday, January 26, 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Tegrachan |
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wow u made me laugh and damned if u didnt make me cry damn good work hope to see more of your works |
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Monday, November 30, 2009 from San Antonio, Earth
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Kenoscope |
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Exceptionally well done. Bravo. I say Bravo. |
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reesedorrycott@yahoo.com |
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Sunday, September 20, 2009 from Brisbane, Austalia
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thasal |
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Love this story it so powerful to read. I was just wondering what happened to Hector and Wendy after they get marry? It would be a great story to read |
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silverhawk19723@yahoo.com.au |
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Wednesday, February 25, 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Ray Drouillard |
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Great story! I'm a sucker for stories of redemption and love. You developed your characters very well, and had enough surprises in the plot to keep us guessing. |
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Ray.Drouillard@gmail.com |
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http://nerd-in-the-country.blogspot.com/ |
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Thursday, December 04, 2008 from Chester, MA, USA
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msboy8 (Wayne) |
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Terrific story and ending! I must say, I always love a happy ending. But the story has to have times of distress, anguish and meaningful actions by the characters to support that ending. Great writing, thanks. |
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msboy8@yahoo.com |
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http://www.asstr.org/~msboy8/ |
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Monday, October 20, 2008 from Edinburgh, Scotland
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Great Sage |
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I am a sucker for happy, sappy true romance tales so this one pleased me greatly, I was left wondering however if most of the PURE group at school were so lacklustre in their devotion to the cause, then why was the group in existence at all - it seemed to be a minority of demented sociopaths. The Purist nutters is one of the reasons I stopped reading MORFS stories for about a year because I got bored with them turning up in every story as the stock cartoon bad guys - surely between 2008 and 2060 these deranged malcontents would have been removed from any position in society where their hate would be able to bother anyone? Anyway that was a general gripe against the universe as a whole rather than this story - the word for this story is ...Adorable. |
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bagfullofkittensrpgs@blueyonder.co.uk |
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Monday, October 20, 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry |
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Wow! That was great. It took me awhile to read since it was so long but I had to finish it.  I love Wendy's mix of powers. It goes perfect with her hybridism too. I'm guessing that the story wasn't labeled properly. It appears to be a complete story instead of a chapter. So I won't wish to see more of this story but I look forward to seeing other stories you may write. Thanks. |
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terrynaut@yahoo.com |
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Monday, October 20, 2008 from Peoria, usa
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Starfighter |
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Very good story and if there is nothing more to it i will say that it doesn't really need anything more added it is a very nice short story that can be expanded on but doesn't need any more. Would love to read more story's like this one. |
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starfght13@yahoo.com |
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Monday, October 20, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Rebekah |
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I absolutely loved this story ... it was very beautifully written |
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whitefyr@gmail.com |
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