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Sunday, July 13, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Early June |
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Well Done! I enjoyed so much of this story it is hard to pick out specifics. I do notice that you are incorporating 'The Elemental Team' in this story. Apparently this will turn up in more stories as the concept comes together. Thank you for the romance. Your characters are distinct and individual. They each take on a personality of their own. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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Saturday, July 12, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Adran |
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Amazing. Very well done. I loved getting to finally see the Space Station I noticed being discussed way back when in the forums. You did a very good job describing how things are now, but now I wanna see more from the Elemental Team even more since this had references to the team. I'm gonna go crazy waiting for more of those stories. Can't wait to see more from you. Keep up the great work! |
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Thursday, July 03, 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry |
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That was fun. I really got caught up in the shuttle scene too. What a ride! The scene at the end was nice. It was good to see a connection between other stories. I only wish there was more to the romance part. It was barely there but at least it ended well. Thanks! 
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Saturday, June 28, 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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The ape |
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wow. couldn't stop reading it! well done! |
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