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Thursday, February 26, 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Name
Terry
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Comment
Aha! I detect another crossover, a very clever one at that.
Lots of symbolism here. It still seems so senseless. There should be a better way to get the point across than letting himself be killed when he was justified for his actions. Why couldn't Serenity have leaked the information a little earlier? Grrrrrr!
Okay. I'm done. Thanks. This is a well-written tale and a fine addition to the MORFS universe.
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Email
terrynaut@yahoo.com
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Homepage:
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Wednesday, February 25, 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Name
Ray Drouillard
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Comment
Great story! I don't like the melancholy ending, but it is a powerful story and a good read. I just wish that Robert could have accomplished what he wanted without sacrificing himself.
[Or maybe Serenity knows a powerful bio elemental who will keep him alive until they can dig him up and rescue him.]
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Email
Ray.Drouillard@gmail.com
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Homepage:
http://nerd-in-the-country.blogspot.com/
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