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Saturday, January 21, 2012 from San Francisco, [not submitted]
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KN
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When will the next chapter of your great story be released?
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noemailtoday81@yahoo.com
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Thursday, February 03, 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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randombloke
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Might I suggest using something like Komposer [free wysiwyg HTML editor] to do the final layout work? Especially since MS Word leaves all sorts of unnecessary tags in there. I once managed to halve the size of a press release by just stripping out the Word garbage.
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Wednesday, February 02, 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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EMW
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I blame shrike for the spacing 
Something went wrong when he converted the file to HTML first it swallowed the first letter after a speech mark then it lost all the formating. I'm trying to get him another version that's fixed
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Wednesday, February 02, 2011 from Renton, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hi again! 
I like chapter 12. Very nice. I liked the relaxed nature.
That coat! I want one! It sounds lovely and very... fitting given the chameleon fabric.
The tease at the end was nice. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long to see how it plays out.
The grammar was tolerable. It was only the formatting that I had a problem with. Please separate the paragraphs with a blank line.
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terrynaut@yahoo.com
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Wednesday, February 02, 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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EMW
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yes unfortunately the two editors I used to use both no longer have the time for it and I've had to take what I could get editing wise and good editors who are willing to edit for free are hard to find, especially since my stuff needs a lot of help with the editing
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Monday, January 31, 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Nicole
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Another great Chapter...Thanks It looks like you have a different editor. It's a good chapter but the editing is not as good as in past chapters. Editing aside I am really enjoying this story.
Nicole
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Friday, July 16, 2010 from Cardiff, Wales (UK)
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DragonElf
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I love your stories. Just reread Salamander 1 & 2... again! One small problem - at the end of S2 ch11, you never tell us what is cooked.
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Wednesday, July 14, 2010 from Guelph, Canada
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Dianna
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Ghost reporting...you called down the thunder...now reap the whirlwind.
SORRY! I Coudln't help myself ^^ anyways, I re-read Salamander [probably one of my favourite stories on here, easily top 5] and Salamander 2. My only realy problem with Salamander 1 is taht I felt it didn't really address Mort's transgender transformation but it's a minor gripe at best.
anyways, I look forward to reading more! <3
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cherryblossomelf@yahoo.ca
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Saturday, April 17, 2010 from Marietta, Ga, USA
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Nicole
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Great story. I am enjoying it a lot.
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tbw69a@gmail.com
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Friday, April 16, 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Xpsi
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Good to see You updating again.
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