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woensdag 30 mei 2012 from Issaquah, WA, USA
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Terry
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This is a good story of redemption. It had some good action and thrills too. I agree with the previous comment that it seemed rushed but you also hinted that there would be more coming. I hope that's the case.

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zaterdag 26 mei 2012 from lake county, ca, United states
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Ganta
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loved the story and the plot. but compaired to the rest of your stories that i loved. this one felt rushed and felt it could have been better with more to it.
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