Comments

Post Entry!
Page 1 of 1 First Page | Previous Page | Next Page | Last Page Page 1 of 1
 

woensdag 9 juni 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
Name
LuthienT
Comment
Caught this a while back, been meaning to comment. Really liked this one - enjoyable read, with many good adventure elements, and some clever powers. I'm glad this story is complete - I'd hate to see it hanging. Wouldn't mind if they showed up in the Salamander episodes at some point in the future, though! [I felt like we already saw the other side of that interaction, but I could have been mistaken and can't find any record of it now.] Anyway - great story, keep em comin'!
Email
[not submitted]
Homepage:
[not submitted]

woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
Name
Ray Drouillard
Comment
I love a good love story. The earlier darkness makes the victory all the sweeter, and forges a deeper bond.

I hope to see the two lovers in a future story.
Email
Ray.Drouillard@gmail.com
Homepage:
http://nerd-in-the-country.blogspot.com/

zaterdag 19 april 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
Name
ZeroLink
Comment
this was a good story i hope to see them some more and maybe a fellow up on what they doing or a new adventure it surprised me that eric didnt think to use his power to kill them by stopping their hearts which would have made it easier to escape but then prolly no mentaion of amanda would have been it so i guess it works out
Email
genises_012000@yahoo.co
Homepage:
[not submitted]

dinsdag 18 maart 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
Name
Max
Comment
Sweet, nice story. I'm more of a revenge type person so it would've been nice to see the family get their just dues, not just 'cooling off' in a cell. There's nothing wrong with a little reverse torture! If you hurt someone, we will hurt you back sort of thing. Anyway nice story, twin sister was a nice touch, same with the tie into Salamander. Good job as always thanks a lot!
Email
[not submitted]
Homepage:
[not submitted]

maandag 17 maart 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
Name
Terry
Comment
That was so sweet. *sniff*

I loved it in spite of the darkness - or maybe because of it. I suppose the darkness made it that much more satisfying once they escaped.

Jessica and Eric make a great couple. Their initial telepathic relationship was a great way to start. Getting together was inevitable!

The use of the telesense and illusion power was very interesting. I don't remember if you mentioned it but I assume Jessica can fly. Having Eric make an illusionary bird, he could be Jessica's companion bird and fly with her to see the same things she does. That would be so cool!

You do tell quite the dark tale but the promise of a happy ending keeps me reading.

Thanks and please keep up the good work.
Email
terrynaut@yahoo.com
Homepage:
[not submitted]

vrijdag 29 februari 2008 from Columbia, USA
Name
grover
Comment
Nice one! I loved the bit about double agent kitty!
hugs!
grover
Email
Grover357@msn.com
Homepage:
[not submitted]

vrijdag 29 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
Name
Al D. Summerlott
Comment
love it
Email
averageman41@hotmail.com
Homepage:
[not submitted]

First Page | Previous Page | Next Page | Last Page
 
Post Entry!

Home
Back