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zaterdag 6 februari 2010 from Santa Monica, Your Nighted States
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Me, Myself, and I
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Meh, nice family to put the main character in. :-| Have to have that humiliation element in there, so that we know it's TG fiction...

In the Whately Academy universe, the character Ayla is similarly intersexed. The gender exploration that other commentators mentioned wanting to see in this story takes place in Ayla's stories, and in many others—most of the original Whateley characters are M2F; one is F2M.
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zondag 13 juli 2008 from cincinnati, USA
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Early June
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This is a much better handling. This is now beginning to develope. I can see the gender issue, the elemental issue, the visibility in school issues all coming to distract poor Hailey. Are the morf changes done or is the body still changing? I hope to see more of this story as its developement is different from a number of the others. Thank you for the enjoyment.
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zaterdag 12 juli 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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I'm glad someone else commented so I don't have two in a row. I wish more people would comment. *sigh*

I love the character. Hail's power and appearance are both very interesting. I wonder how he'll do in school. I imagine he'll have to go as a girl and be referred to with female pronouns but what about the restrooms and locker rooms?

I look forward to see how you resolve the various gender issues.

Thanks and please continue.
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donderdag 10 juli 2008 from San Diego, US
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dutch
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I enjoy reading this story, so far. Keep up the great writting.
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maandag 28 april 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey. From what I can remember, this new version is a good improvement. The first story was a bit vague in places but this one is very clear.

I love the pink neosilk hair! I'm green with envy!! *sigh*

Please keep up the good work. I look forward to part 2.
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zondag 27 april 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Kelsey
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yeah, i was stuck on part two and so i switched the perspective from third to first. i find that easier to write. part 2 is coming soon.
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zaterdag 26 april 2008 from Redding, USA
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ChrisW
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Is this a reworded repost form 12-09-07?
I ask this because that is when I originally downloaded this story.

Its a good one though!

HUGGELS
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vrijdag 25 april 2008 from Columbia, SC, USA
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grover
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I wondered about the gender issue as well. Still the sound elemental idea is interesting. Lots of potential with everything from sonar to focused sound waves. Nice one!
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maandag 10 december 2007 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey. That was good. I'd like to see the gender issue brought up soon but I imagine you'll get to it eventually.

The effects of being a sound elemental were very interesting, and they successfully distracted me from the gender issue while I was reading. It wasn't until after I finished that I wondered about it.

Thanks. I'm looking forward to more. Please keep up the good work.
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zondag 9 december 2007 from [not submitted], England
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EMW
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A nice start to a new story. Your protagonist is interesting it will fun to see how he handles his new situation and how people react to him. It's also an interesting power that hasn't been seen much in other stories and then not in a main character.
I look forward to reading more of your story
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