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dinsdag 16 februari 2010 from Santa Monica, Your Nighted States
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Me, Myself, and I
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Part IV is back down again 'for editing', and apparently has been so for the past year. Would've been nice if Roni had left the previous draft up while revising it, so that visitors could at least have some idea, in the mean time, of how the story ends. Guess not, though. At least she didn't take is down [with sincere apologies, of course] so that she could tell readers that they can buy the book if they want to see how it ends. Nevertheless, we're left with the disappointment of another unfinished story, knowing that it actually was completed, but then part of it was withdrawn.

I hope Roni is doing OK; the comment she left telling of physical abuse at the hands of the wife is quite chilling. The travails of being TG? So much for the propaganda that women are the only victims of domestic violence.
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dinsdag 19 augustus 2008 from Fort Mill, SC, USA
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Roni
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Part IV up, and a new one, 'A Byte Out Of Time', AKA Hacker's Tale, Part I has been sent for proofing to Brit & Holly. I'm working on Carl Patterson [Grelex] now, as well as Byte parts II and III, and Shave V. I'm searching for story ideas for Sparks and Chameleon, if anyone's interested, e-mail me.
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donderdag 14 augustus 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey there. I didn't notice that part 4 was out when I posted my last comment. My stupid browser doesn't update frames very well. I reloaded the frame today and found the latest stories.

Part 4 is cool. I love Carl/Grelex the Eagox. I hope you're able to fit in more of his story. I'd like to know more about how, where and when he handled getting MORFS. Time travel can be confusing!

I look forward to seeing Roni learn to master her power. It'll be nice to have a name for their little group too!

Thanks and please keep up the good work.
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woensdag 13 augustus 2008 from [not submitted], England
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EMW
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I enjoyed the new part with her learning a bit more about her powers and about her friends. I look forward to reading more.

Keep up the good work

EMW
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zaterdag 9 augustus 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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I'm glad to hear you've healed and are back to writing.

I think your revised version is much better than the original, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

The odd connection between Roni and Amber really has me wondering what's going on and I love that.

Thanks.
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woensdag 30 juli 2008 from Fort Mill, SC, USA
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Roni
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Thanks, Brit, for posting the REVISED SHAVE. So much better than the original, UNFINISHED works. Part 4 is in the works, as well as a new one: A Byte Out Of Time, AKA Hacker's Tale. And Yes, Chronastasia will have FULL MASTERY of time soon.
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woensdag 5 maart 2008 from Fort Mill, SC, USA
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Roni
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OK, here's what happened:

I started to write this story, and sent rough drafts to Holly for approval and revision ideas. I then was attacked by my [soon to be] ex-wife, and was away from everything for about a year. I'm back, physically healed, and writing again. Brit has the revisions/expansions to parts 1-3, part 4 is being re-written now, and I have sent Brit and Holly a mock up for Hacker... Look for the revised/new stories soon.
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zondag 30 september 2007 from Edinburgh, Scotland (UK)
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Great Sage
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Confusing, fragmented, incoherent and lacking in any sort of description or personality to the central character. One moment she is a guy next an apparently well adjusted teen girl no post MORFS description, no journey of discovery or acceptance of her new reality, you mention Sanura twice but also mention others that don't appear to be part of Team Cat girl, stop teasing and avoiding telling your story and actually do this right - you write like you are on meds or something - sorry if this is in fact the case but there is a kernel of a good idea here I just find the method of delivery irritating - no hard feelings I hope
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zaterdag 27 januari 2007 from it's NOT in Denmark :), Netherlands
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Jo-Anne
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A _very_ intriguing story. Refreshingly different. To be honest I could do with a little less fragmentation, and some more elaborative dialogue and 'flesh to the bone'. But nonetheless I'd like to read more. Very much so.
Thank you very much for sharing this thus far.
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donderdag 18 januari 2007 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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jo
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iI will comment later !
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