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vrijdag 24 juni 2011 from eastern, USA
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tand
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good story, even though Chap 9 says new, it looks like it might be inactive. Would like to see how this turns out. Thank you for writing it, and please keep on writing...
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dinsdag 7 september 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Reader
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I love this story, I keep coming back to read it and I'd love to see it updated and to see where the story goes! Good job, and please continue!
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woensdag 9 juni 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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LuthienT
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Liked the update! Looking forward to seeing where things go... wondering what the 'shadow agents' are up to, haven't heard much from/about them lately...
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zondag 6 juni 2010 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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More emotion and more forgiveness. Very nice. I'm most pleased.

I like how the group has changed, and I like how Mia is changing her life to suit both herself and Toni. Things are progressing nicely. I just wonder how it's all going to end.

Thanks for the story.
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donderdag 17 september 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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This was quite the emotional chapter. I liked it though. It gives the story some good depth. I think it was necessary too. Mia needed to sort herself out sometime. She might not always have Julia to keep her balanced.

The scene with her stepfather was good. It's nice to see a story with some forgiveness. Too many stories rage with revenge and violence.

Thanks very much. Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. That last part had me cringing ... in a good way ... if that makes sense.
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donderdag 2 juli 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Dolfiend
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I stumbled on to the MORF series at stories on line. I have as yet found not one story that was realy complete . Why is that ?

And why do darn near all of them center around boys morfing into girls ?

Your writing is excelent and brings many emotions I had been trying to forget back to me. Perhaps this is more like a good book I hate to get to the end of.
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woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Ray Drouillard
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I love the way this story is twisting and turning, and how you are developing the characters.

I'm concerned about the father spying on his own kids -- especially since his boss seems to have bad plans for them.
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zaterdag 21 februari 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey. That was a cool chapter with a cool idea. I love the revelation about how Mia kept comfortable with herself. It's very interesting. I also love how she found out about it.

That little girl is quite a character, and she's so cute. She'll help Mia accept herself in the long run too. I just know it.

Thanks very much and please keep up the good work.
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donderdag 23 oktober 2008 from Edinburgh, Scotland
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Great Sage
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I just reread this - I am concerned about Julia - initially the two sisters were inseparable but something seems to have driven a wedge between them, worse Julia has become almost invisible in the story - I think in one chapter her name was mentioned once in passing - this is odd behaviour for a twin that swore to be there for her new sister, also I don't think she is a water elemental - I think Tears Elemental is more like it.
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zondag 25 mei 2008 from Boston, USA
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Denkkar
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Looks like PlatinumDragon11 beat me to what I was going to say. So let me try for different words. The twin aspect sure gets milked for all it's worth along two axes: the gender reunification and the emotional dynamic reversal. Very entertaining to read
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