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woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
Name
Ray Drouillard
Comment
I'm a sucker for stories of redemption. This story is that, and a lot more. I love the dreamy quality, and the way Serenity can make a few subtle changes that change the entire life of two [three, actually] people.
Email
Ray.Drouillard@gmail.com
Homepage:
http://nerd-in-the-country.blogspot.com/

zondag 22 februari 2009 from Brisbane, Austalia
Name
thasal
Comment
Love the story. It made me cry abit i hope there is more stories like that one
Email
silverhawk19723@yahoo.com.au
Homepage:
[not submitted]

woensdag 16 juli 2008 from Midwest, United States of America
Name
KR
Comment
Thank you for a thought-provoking story. I didn't cry, but had it been longer, I might have. Powerful writing there.
Email
doswin31@yahoo.com
Homepage:
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zondag 13 juli 2008 from cincinnati, [not submitted]
Name
Early June
Comment
This was a wonderful piece. It carried full thoughts and presented deep emotions. I was crying before I knew it. How nice of you to write!
Thank you for this fine example of philosophical prose.
Email
April35showers@hotmail.com
Homepage:
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zaterdag 12 juli 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
Name
Jonas M
Comment
This was different than other stories here which makes it more interesting. I enjoyed the dream like quality of it. I think that a sequel about Serenity herself would kind of ruin the dream like aspect of this story. It was much more engaging for me to learn about her through what she did and how she helped the main character. I think the mystery that created about her is one of the driving aspects of the story. It would be nice to see more of her doing her work in future stories though. Good work, keep it up.
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[not submitted]
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zaterdag 28 juni 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
Name
Terry
Comment
That was a very cute and wonderful story. I liked the dreamy feel to it. Thanks.

Serenity has very interesting powers. I hope to read a story centered around her sometime. *hint* *hint*

Please keep writing.
Email
terrynaut@yahoo.com
Homepage:
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maandag 23 juni 2008 from Boston, USA
Name
Ersatz
Comment
Please give us some white space between paragraphs. It's really hard to read.

Thanks,
Ersatz
Email
ersatz_001@yahoo.com
Homepage:
http://asstr.org/~Ersatz

vrijdag 20 juni 2008 from Fort White, USA
Name
T.
Comment
Oh my G-O-D!!! That was one of the best stories I have ever read. You could wring tears from a stone. You gave me the courage to call my wife, and apoligize to her, even though I felt she had done me wrong. She is coming home, and we are going to talk. You just never know what good your words, whether written or spoken, might do. Thank you.
Email
retcop_t2@yahoo.com
Homepage:
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donderdag 19 juni 2008 from Toronto, Canada
Name
Stephanie_B
Comment
I loved it.

I heard about this story in the forum and had an idea what it would be, but it turned out so much better that I expected. It's a beautiful piece of work and made me wonder, 'What if..?'
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woensdag 18 juni 2008 from Columbia, SC, USA
Name
grover
Comment
Not what I was expecting from the title! But oh my what a sweet piece of writing! This was really good and I loved it.
hugs!
grover
Email
Grover357@msn.com
Homepage:
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