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dinsdag 4 februari 2014 from Eugene, [not submitted]
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cilir
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More even though it was partly confusing in some places it was great.
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zondag 2 februari 2014 from Hot springs, Unighted States
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Gianna Michelle
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I have one complaint and request all in one I WANT MORE CHAPTERS lol. I am really enjoying the story this has to be the third time. I have reread the chapters you have already posted Please post some more as soon as possible it really is a great story
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maandag 2 december 2013 from sunshine coast, australia
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blake
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Hey mate bring on the next chapter you can't quit now the story is just warming up
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donderdag 28 maart 2013 from Dallas, [not submitted]
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Wil
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I'm only going to say this one. Where the NEXT Installment. Don't make me Cwy!!!! Yes I spelled it like that on purpose.
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vrijdag 16 maart 2012 from Sevierville, TN, [not submitted]
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Jaws
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Really well written time jump, waiting on the next installment
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donderdag 2 februari 2012 from Everett Wa, USA
Name
WolfMAMA
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The last chapter was a bit hard to follow but good writing just the same I just need to read it again. The first four chapters were very good, and I hope that you continue the story.
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dinsdag 29 maart 2011 from Antigo, USA
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peter
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it is good story and wonder what happens next to them. who is the lady that put jace in the system as a agent. it will be fun reading the new parts when they are ready.
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zondag 13 februari 2011 from Lincoln, CA, USA
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Karl
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Great so far! Chapter 5 a little confusing. You just have to continue this story line.
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donderdag 11 november 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Sadarsa
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was doing great up to part 5... it wasnt that i couldnt follow it... more that it couldnt hold my interest for some reason. anyway, i stopped reading about 1/4 the way into the story. but i loved the other 4 parts
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woensdag 29 september 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Daniel
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Had a difficult time following part 5
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