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woensdag 14 mei 2014 from Issaquah, WA, USA
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Terry
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Nice ending. I like the story.

The scene with the tornado was great. The reference to the title was nice too.

Thanks for another very good story.

- Terry
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donderdag 30 januari 2014 from Moses Lake, Wa, US
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Tanym
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Arg! Another good one that I have to wait for the next part. Keep up the good work!
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dinsdag 17 december 2013 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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blake
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Hey shrike please finish this story I've read these 4 chapters at least 3 times - i can't wait to find out what her school life is now going to be like
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woensdag 24 april 2013 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Ken
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Thank you for the continuation of your story.
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woensdag 24 april 2013 from Issaquah, WA, USA
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Terry
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Thank goodness Sinthia met with Marjorie. That's an important step for both of them I think.

I like Mack. Too bad he couldn't have been a stronger influence to keep Walter on track. It took MORFS to change Walter into Sinthia before she'd change.

Thanks for the story.
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vrijdag 19 april 2013 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Shrike
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Done and Done
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zondag 18 september 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Beyogi
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A continuation of this interesting story would be nice...
and if someone could remove then spam ^^

Thank you for writing.
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woensdag 23 maart 2011 from Lincoln, CA, USA
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Karl or Chopper
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A very interesting story. Wish you could write faster, I'm not that patient waiting months for a new chapter to be posted. Keep up the great work!
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zaterdag 13 maart 2010 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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I'm very happy to see that Sinthia wasn't able to commit suicide. There were some sad and tense moments but it looks she's seeing some good things about her change. I see a light at the end of the tunnel.

Thanks.
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zaterdag 6 maart 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Riniko
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Great story, I had to go back to the beginning and reread it, so that I could follow it as it has been awhile since the last update. There were a few minor grammar errors, but that's not a big deal to me. I hope that you keep writing the story as it is very interesting.
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