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zaterdag 11 februari 2012 from Wisc Rapids, United States
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Sweet-Girl87
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When is the next chapter coming out????
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vrijdag 12 augustus 2011 from [not submitted], Washington
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The English Teacher
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Your story is very well written. I enjoyed the plot very much and I think it has great potential. You may even want to make it into a series like the comics your hero is so into. One thing you might develop is having his Sabertoothed friend work with him?
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woensdag 30 juli 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Brutus
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I like the story, would like to see it continued. However, the way Ghost is playing with guns is a little chancy, because some people tend to carry it cocked ready to fire and when startled, pull the trigger. So unless Ghost is mostly phased, he could get hurt.
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zaterdag 26 april 2008 from [not submitted], australia
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geoff
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great story brittney.i like the almost ghostly appearence of max [lol].to disappear & re appear like the story character not only would give a fright but it would keep the old bowel movements regular [LOL LOL].please keep up the top story & regards from down under ozzie land,geoff
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maandag 3 maart 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Roni
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Brit has done it again! Nice work.
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maandag 18 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Civilmage
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Good start. I like the whole Ghost thing. It seems it's just a step from there to put him in a bottle and then he'd be a bottle of djinn.

This story opens up a whole range of possibilities for the Morfs universe. I presume his power is a form of elemental. I look forward to seeing more.

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zaterdag 9 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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James
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Beaut first chapter.
Thanks for the story
James
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zondag 13 januari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Early June
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Nice start. But then I always see the top quality story from Britney. This is obviously just the build up for the story so I will sit back and wait for more to be posted. If he can be injured while half in and half out of this state, how will he protect from criminals who might wield weapons of messy destruction? An important part of your story is the subtle humor you include. I notice that all of my most highly regarded writers intersperse humor in the narratives. Thnak you for sharing this with us.
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donderdag 13 december 2007 from Philadelphia, USA
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KenJ
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This is a really fun beginning, can't wait for part 2!

There is one thing I'm curious about. What does Max's voice sound like, and did MORPHS make any changes in it?

The thing is, when 'Ghost' started talking while stopping the robbery I wondered if the sound of his voice would have broken the illusion that he was a girl. After all, far more often then not, both the tone and range of teenage boys' and girls' voices are easily identifiable as male or female. In this case Max didn't say much, and the people who heard his voice had other things to focus on. However, how Max sounds as 'Ghost' is something he needs to think about and work on for his disguise to hold up.

Besides, if Max does a really good job learning to speak like a young woman, he will then have to make sure he doesn't make the mistake of using his girl voice when he's not wearing his 'Ghost' costume. Sounds like an amusing possibility, don't you think?
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maandag 10 december 2007 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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I was very pleased to see that Max wouldn't abandon his friend. I'm still hoping that Josh will eventually see his parents again sometime. Perhaps he could start out by emailing them. His parents should have email. They gave him his laptop to take with him so they be open to at least communicating with him through email. Josh still has their picture too so I'm assuming he misses them. It's very sad but hopefully things will work out.

I think Valentine brought up a valid issue about Ghost's costume in the forum. He wasn't explicit but I'm sure he meant that Ghost's secret identity could be compromised by ordering his costumes online. Even if he didn't use his real name, he used his address. That wouldn't be a good idea. I hope he finds a more secure way to get extra costumes in the future.

So thanks Britney and please keep up the good work.
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