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zondag 24 februari 2008 from [not submitted], USA
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Early june
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Another good, reading chapter. I may a little ahead of the posted script, the newly morfed swain, who wont take no for an answer, has acquired a powerful set of tk/tp talents and is taking out his obstacles, first the poor soccer guy Em kissed, then the lady who was going to report him. I worry for Nat, Caitlin, And Em.
I am glad to see her, as yet, undefined talent making its appearance. It sure scared the hell out of the slug in the kitchen. [Goodie, goodie, cackle]
This story has lots of promise and is fun to read. please complete it for our entertainement and your satisfaction. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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zondag 17 februari 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Ah. Thanks for another couple chapters of this wonderful story.

I love Em's mum telling her to look at her change as a chance to start anew. It really is a cool way of looking at it.

The chocolate cake addiction was nice to read about too. I'm an addict myself so I can relate. In fact, I'll probably be scouting for my favorite chocolate cake when I go grocery shopping later. *drool*

Please keep up the good work, E.
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zaterdag 16 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Valentine
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Very good.

I must say it was funny seeing them discussing 'ancient' photography techniques, then deciding to go see a film.

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zaterdag 16 februari 2008 from baltimore, Merryland
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zebra
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Caitlyn could be the lucky receiver of many wonderful massages. Makes me wish for my own 6 armed girl.
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zaterdag 9 februari 2008 from Columbia, SC, USA
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grover
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This was a really good start to this one. I liked it.
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zaterdag 9 februari 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey. That was a fun romp. It was mostly happy anyway.

Mark is a disturbing character but I sense there's more to him. Perhaps he has some strange power. Who knows - except you. :p

I'm looking forward to more of this story. I want to see what nickname - if any - Em gets. Could she end up being called Spidergirl? She does have 8 limbs after all. I also can't wait to see who she picks as best kisser. I have a feeling Em will pick Caitlin so Nat can have Shaun.

Thanks and please keep up the good work.
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zaterdag 9 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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zebra
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Great story, I look forward to the next installment.
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