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maandag 27 juni 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Hi again... So many ways of breaking into a place from the shuttle once you get close. as soon as they said Airlock, I figured, teleport to an airlock with the cocaine. Wondered why the K9 agent didnt' sniff out the person who was just there?? Corrections... ======= had their weapons trained in anyone who [in->on] ======== When he did finally turned and looked ['he did finally turn and look' or {drop 'did'}] |
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maandag 13 juni 2011 from Renton, WA, USA
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This is very good. I like the idea of the space station, though it seems more like an artificial satellite/moon really. I don't normally read crime stories but the exotic location and MORFS make this story quite compelling. I look forward to seeing how it all plays out. Thanks! 
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donderdag 5 mei 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Good story, it has potential. I'm curious how the leaves for Inferno are brought to Tenkei and where the Chemical Elemental would be hiding. |
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