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maandag 27 juni 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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David
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Hi again... So many ways of breaking into a place from the shuttle once you get close. as soon as they said Airlock, I figured, teleport to an airlock with the cocaine. Wondered why the K9 agent didnt' sniff out the person who was just there??
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had their weapons trained in anyone who [in->on]
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When he did finally turned and looked
['he did finally turn and look' or {drop 'did'}]
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maandag 13 juni 2011 from Renton, WA, USA
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Terry
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This is very good. I like the idea of the space station, though it seems more like an artificial satellite/moon really.
I don't normally read crime stories but the exotic location and MORFS make this story quite compelling. I look forward to seeing how it all plays out.
Thanks!
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donderdag 5 mei 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Shrike
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Good story, it has potential. I'm curious how the leaves for Inferno are brought to Tenkei and where the Chemical Elemental would be hiding.
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