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vrijdag 30 mei 2008 from Melbourne, Australia
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James
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Please finish this wonderful story!
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zondag 2 maart 2008 from Muncie-IN, USA
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Fotherfredrick
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Cool Hope there is more soon.
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dinsdag 26 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Shrike
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Very interesting story.

I need more now.
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dinsdag 26 februari 2008 from columbia, SC, USA
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Grover
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Wow this was a great story! You really nailed Tom's discomfort and dismay about HER changes. I have a funny feeling that the bullies really isn't going to like Jennifer when she angry! With just those knife sharp nails of hers, she is dangerous. If she has any other enhancements it will be even worse for them. It has occured to me that she could use some sort of clear polymer coat on the tips to blunt her nails to keep the damage to her environment to a minimal. Again very well done!!!
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dinsdag 26 februari 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Cool! You really got me with this one. It doesn't hurt that Jennifer looks a lot like my character, Bobbi.

What is her power, some sort of odd multiple personality disorder? Is another part of herself going to take control and tap into whatever power she has? If so, I wonder if the other personality is the only one that can tap into the power. I also wonder what the power is! Halp! I need answers! I need the next chapter!

Okay. It's late. I must be off to bed now. It's late here in the States. Thanks and please oh please oh please keep writing this intriguing story.
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