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woensdag 26 juni 2013 from Issaquah, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey!

It's nice to see another chapter of this story. I checked and was surprised to see that the previous story was posted way back in 2009. Yikes! That's a long time.

I started rereading chapter 3 and it all came back to me. I have a good memory.

I really like this story. Violet continues to paint herself into a corner but I'm still hoping she'll find a way out. It's so frustrating but that's part of what makes this story so good.

Keep up the good work and please don't wait so long between postings.
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zondag 18 september 2011 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Beyogi
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This is a really intersting story... I hope Jen will be able to stop Violet.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for writing,
Beyogi
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donderdag 13 augustus 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Another long wait and again, it was worth it.

I like the communication between Violet and Jen. I hope Jen can talk some sense into her violent 'twin' before it's too late.

I like the dysfunctional small time gang. They should provide a good temporary home for Violet while she tries to get her act together. Perhaps Jen will develop a power [or strengthen her strange imaginary friend ability] to even the odds and have a better chance at snapping Violet out of her blossoming life of crime. I can hope!

Thanks for the chapter. Please keep up the good work.
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dinsdag 7 juli 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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MShrieken
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Great story! I'd really like to see where this one leads. The concept of multiple personalities certainly provides for some interesting situations, especially with the rather extreme difference between Jennifer and Violet.

Also, go Sally!

M
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maandag 20 oktober 2008 from Edinburgh, Scotland
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Great Sage
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Another fine story from EMW, I am interested to see where things go from here. Tom's anguish over his changes was well done and I am amused that the poor girl really is worrying over nothing regarding her relationship with that girls she likes. Hopefully things will work out for her - one thing though - as you know EMW in the real world we have various laws regarding who we employ in our schools - surely unpleasant bigots like that secretary would be screened out? of course even with Disclosure Act dodgy folk slip past the net as we know from some distressing occurrences in the real world. I wish someone would just round up all those bigots and exile them to Greenland or something - I *REALLY* hate bullies.
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donderdag 24 juli 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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redalert
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would love to read some more of this one.
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zondag 13 juli 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hiya. It's me again.

Part 2 was long in coming but it was worth waiting for. I love Violet's strength and toughness. That should protect her as she gets into more trouble.

It seems all too easy for powerful MORFS to get on the wrong side of the law. Society really ought to do something about that.

Thanks and please don't make us poor readers wait so long for the next chapter.
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woensdag 4 juni 2008 from Los Angeles, USA
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Kendall
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Great story so far - interestin characterizations - I like your people - when is the next installment?
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maandag 2 juni 2008 from [not submitted], united states
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peter
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it is a good story to read and it would be fun to read the new chapter.
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zaterdag 31 mei 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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G.K.S
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This was really, very good.

I wanted to compliment you, and encourage you to write more.
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