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woensdag 15 oktober 2008 from [not submitted], England
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EMW
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I really like the way the character is portrayed in this story a young kid depressed and alone partly due to his own unwillingness to fit in. I like the way his stubborn attitude with a partly childlike way of approaching things is shown where he makes a plan to walk to his sister or brother treating things as black and white and not really seeing that things are more complicated than just reaching them.
Now he has his power I wonder what trouble and adventures he will have on his way to find his family.
I look forward to seeing more, keep up the good work

EMW
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dinsdag 14 oktober 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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That was so sad a beginning, but at least the new power is making up for it.

I'm curious why the telepath didn't pick up on it. Is the Adam's ability more of a physical enhancement? I know telepaths aren't perfect. I was just wondering.

I look forward to reading more.
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