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zaterdag 11 februari 2012 from Wisc Rapids, United States
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Sweet-Girl87
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When is the next chapter of 'Charlie' coming out????
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vrijdag 14 mei 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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rokaniry
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any news on the next chapter. loved the first one.
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woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Ray Drouillard
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Very good start with lots of gripping emotional content. I just wish it wasn't such a long cliffhanger. ;-]

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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zondag 6 juli 2008 from Memphis, USA
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Centaur
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well the break are not going to get any better. working on Chapter two as we speak
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dinsdag 1 juli 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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That was a bit dark but I can see hope for poor Charlie. He seemed emotionally numb but he has a very supportive family and caring friends.

The rednecks were a bit much. I even started rooting for them to go over the cliff rather than just end up in the ditch. Grrrrr!

I look forward to reading more. Please help that poor kid.
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donderdag 26 juni 2008 from Bristol, UK
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Steve 57
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Hi, your posting, is clear and full of emotion, please post some more, before charlie bleeds to death. Hope his sisters can regrow his finger.
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dinsdag 24 juni 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Tegrachan
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damn that is well written i can feel the story so well i look forward to further chapters
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donderdag 19 juni 2008 from Toronto, Canada
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Stephanie_B
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Some of us have been unfortunate to lose someone close. I feel as if you've captured the emotion and confusion that I felt at that time perfectly.

I truly hope that things work out for Charlie, but suspect that he'll have a dark journey before they do.
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woensdag 18 juni 2008 from Columbia, SC, USA
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grover
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Poor kid! He just can't get any sort of a break here. This story is dark and bleak but that is offset by the presence of his loving family and friends. I'm reminded of a line from the movie 'Crow' when Eddie Draven says, 'It can't rain forever' I am looking forward to more of this well written and absorbing story!

hugs!
grover
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