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donderdag 3 september 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Shrike
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I haven't even considered going with that yet. You've given me a new idea to pursue with Caryn. Maybe she'll try to find her old friends that got missing. Who knows what will come out next on this story. Still I need to think up more before writing on. But be assured, this story isn't over yet.
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donderdag 3 september 2009 from Lawrence, Ks, USA
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Janet L
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The concept of a Talibanized Indonesia is more than a little scary since from their independence into the '70s it was a country famed for intolerance of 'foreigners,' be they Dutch, Chinese or other.

in the grips of Wahhabi Islam, Indonesia could be a terifying place for anyone with a element of outsider in their makeup, be it as a Christian or Hindu or as a MORFS survivor.

I was kind of disappointed that rather than exploring this conflict charged situation, with Caryn rebelling against her repressive government, she was spirited off by drug trafficers and then rescued like the helpless heroine of a '30s serial.

Shrike, I've liked all of your other stories I've read to date and I trust Caryn's training for and participation in ECLIPSE will make up for the discarded possibilities in this part..
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woensdag 2 september 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey! I just finished the story.

It's so dark! But I like it. I'm glad that things got turned around for the better.

I look forward to hearing about how Caryn learns to use her powers. That's my favorite part of MORFS stories.

I'm guessing that a telepath was able to scan her to see that she's a very powerful elemental but it would've been nice to have it explained in the story.

The cameos of your other characters were nice to see. I was surprised at how many children Synergy had! Sheesh. Heh.

Thanks for the story. Please keep the chapters coming.
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maandag 31 augustus 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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This is the first appearance of the ECLIPSE team in action, hope there will be lots more coming.
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