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woensdag 8 december 2010 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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shrike
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I prefer canon, but that's just me
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zaterdag 24 oktober 2009 from [not submitted], australia
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gearloose
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like the way the story goes so far.it in my opinion has the potential makings of a No1 story.this ozzie reader enjoyed the effort,10/10 for your effort from this reader.kindest regards to all gearloose in ozz
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woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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See. This is why I advocated non-canon stories. This is cool!

Your writing is clean and clear, and you captured the mind of a youth pretty well. My only complaint is that your chapters are so darned short. I just get into it and it stops. *sigh*

I love Microsoft's future by the way. No empire lasts forever. heh

I can't believe I'm the first one to post a comment. This story deserves more attention.

Thanks and please keep up the good work. Please finish this story.
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