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maandag 1 april 2013 from Dallas, [not submitted]
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Wil
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I started reading this yesterday and just completed up to Part 4. I guess I should have glanced at how long ago it was posted. ;-{ I want more.

Wil
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maandag 15 juni 2009 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Hey! Part 4 is here! It's time for some more orca action. Cool.

So it looks like Kathy is very important for a lot of reasons. Good. I hope a much needed reunion takes place in the next chapter!

I have to say that I'm getting sick of Orus and Borns. I hope they're put down like a mad dog soon. Grrrrrr!

Thanks very much for another good chapter. I like the passion.

P.S. You left a note about Joy's [written as Joe's] telepathy near the end. You'll want to remove that.
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zondag 7 juni 2009 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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garion75472
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i like the read but i like the name you chose for your self better its one of ny favorite movies pilgrim

'ladies ill get us up those stairs or my names not george washinton mcklin--toooooccccckkkkk'
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woensdag 25 februari 2009 from Tustin, MI, USA
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Ray Drouillard
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This is a great story. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

I liked the addition of the Moonlight Sonata. It inspired me to search my collection of music for it. I fell in love with the piece after hearing it once. Thank you.

It looks like Donovan is having some interesting adventures, and making some good things happen.

I kind of wonder why he didn't initially follow the sewer out to the Nile, and finally to the ocean. With his powers, he would have no problem going pretty much anywhere in the world -- at least, anywhere with water.

Still, he is going good things right where he is.
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zondag 5 oktober 2008 from Devonport , Tasmania, Australia
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Angela
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I have just finished reading the third chapter of Your wonderful story Beyond the Sea & I am waiting on the next chapter .

Anthony .
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donderdag 17 juli 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Nice chapter. My heart weeped for Joy and smiled at Kathy. Now if only Don can find Buffy. *sigh*

I noticed quite a few typos. They were distracting but the story more than made up for them.

Thanks and please keep writing. I'll be waiting.
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maandag 28 april 2008 from cincinnati, USA
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Early June
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This is a very enjoyable story. Your water elemental is using characteristics not evident in other's portrayals. He is most effective.
I can't help but say that I am now looking for the next chapter. Of course your cliff hanging exit adds to that. I wouldn't though, if it were not so good. An excellent addition to the Morfs anthology.
Thank you for sharing this with us
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maandag 28 april 2008 from Bellevue, WA, USA
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Terry
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Cool. Don is a cool character. I like how he could sense water all around him and use it to map buildings and even people. I loved how he froze people in place by controlling the water in their bodies.

So now he's on the run. But did he have to escape through the sewers? Ewwww! Yuck. Heh.

I look forward to more. Please keep up the good work.
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woensdag 27 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Null
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Really good piece of work, i enjoyed reading that!
Cant wait to read more about Donovan!
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maandag 25 februari 2008 from [not submitted], USA
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Early June
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Very good! Thank you for a fine first chapter. The reading is clear and easy. The plot is interesting.
For some reason I liked that he was singing as a whale. Perhaps we will learn that he can communicate with some of the sealife.
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