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maandag 18 maart 2013 from Dallas, [not submitted]
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Wil
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Great Story.
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donderdag 28 februari 2008 from spalding, united kingdom
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mike
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its about time one of the stories was about older people morfing . great story very enjoyable
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vrijdag 8 februari 2008 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Torch
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I have to say the story was great, it really 'sounded' like someone was telling it, I thought that was a great addition.
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donderdag 27 september 2007 from Edinburgh, Scotland (UK)
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Great Sage
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Oh yeah, definitely cute felt like it ended a bit abruptly - the Doctors Martin are mentioned in another authors story [Angel's Tale] so I am interested in how this aspect of the story arc plays out - could it be that they have discovered the miracle drug of eternal youth.
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dinsdag 3 april 2007 from [not submitted], usa
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early june
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What an exciting story!. And I need to compliment you on your reworking of this essay. It is much more understandable and, of course, more complete. It is a fitting addition to the Morf's growing collection of good tales. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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maandag 5 februari 2007 from Bellevue, USA
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Terry
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Oh yeah. That was just about the cutest, nicest story I've read in a long time. I loved it. Having mature adults get MORFS is interesting and I love how all four of the family members are kitty hybrids.


There was one typo I found about two thirds of the way through. You wrote that Kevin had fixed breakfast when you must have meant Larry.

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maandag 5 februari 2007 from [not submitted], USA
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GreenEggs667
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I like that this story centers around mature adults. Not that I think teenage angst can't be fun but MORFS needs adults @ adult problems. Note there hasn't been a single story yet set outside the middle/upper class USA social stratum. Ok, enough of soapboxing, good story and very humorous. I hope we see in future installments more off just what happens to the good Doctors dealing w/and reacting too society and it's warts.

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zondag 4 februari 2007 from Jacksonville beach, fl, US
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don
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Nice start to your tale. It started off very slowly with the background. but then when the morf's of both the teens and then the parents into sealpoints felines, was like the 1st part was written in the style of an doctor's report. then the style was with that all things new with worlds to explore.

The narrow minded fools better wacth out!!

Will be awaiting the next parts in this kitty tail! {grin}

Blessed be!
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zaterdag 3 februari 2007 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Micky
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good story

started slow but got better the more I read. Want to see the next part. as soon as posible lol.

miki
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zaterdag 3 februari 2007 from [not submitted], [not submitted]
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Max
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Excellent story! So far very lighthearted and entertaining. Could become more serious with the Anti-Morphs groups but regardless well written, good story. At the very beginning it was slightly slow but quickly built up momentum. Really no major gramatical errors I saw, 'professor mode' wasn't annoying or boring, just don't go overboard, and well just a generally good job, very cute descriptions. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks!
-Max
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